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  • Mood: Suffering
  • Listening to: ring around the rosie
  • Reading: stephen king
  • Watching: animal documentaries
  • Playing: nothing
  • Eating: nothing
  • Drinking: got milk?

(im going to write this in third person because I dunno what to do!!!!!)

it's been three months scince y/n has seen her little brother. Eyeless jack is doing his morning stuff, and is now waiting for y/n to come downstairs, because he needs to ask her something. When she finally walked down the stairs, she looked sorry.

"y/n I need to ask you something-" jack asked but was cut off by y/n.

"Sorry for being so moody the last week or so, Jack. How can I make it up to you?" y/n murmered when she wrapped him up in a hug. Jack, being a 17 year old, grabbed her waist and pulled her to him. He then began to kiss her neck. She pushed him away.

"I'm not too sure about that jack, im a virgin, and theres lots of people here." y/n murmered, blushing furiously. Jack pulled her close again.

"Don't worry, I will be very gentle, I promise." And with that he took y/n into a secret cabin. Nobody knew where this was. Only jack and y/n. He laid her down on the bed gently, then straddled her hips. He was kissing her when he started to work his hands up her shirt, she moaned softly. Jack smirked, she was sensitive. Soon enough, her shirt was off, and he put his hands on her small breasts and felt them through her simple bra. He kissed the small dots on the top of them, making her moan, then her started kissing his way down to her pajama pants. He looked up, asking permission.

"NNNoooooo...." y/n groaned "it's not fair you are still fully dressed!" jack sat up and smirked, "fine then, undress me." y/n blushed then smoothy slid her hands up his shirt. He shivered. Then he pounced on top of her.

"Now it's your turn" and he pulled the pants down, along with the panties. y/n hissed when the cold air hit her. Jack was staring at her with his mask off now, like a child in a candy shop. He gently opened her legs, and began to lick. y/n moaned, long and loud, then he carefully thrust his fingers inside her. She gasped and arched her back. Then she giggled.

"Now it is your turn." Jack laid down, and let y/n undress the rest of him. The hardened member of his boxers was showing now, and y/n looked at it nervously. Then Jack placed one of his hands on the back of her head, giving her a hint. She blushed and started to put the member in her mouth. She was deepthroating Jack now, her hands were on his hips because she didn't want him to buck, but she sucked as hard as she could when Jack forced her head up and down, over and over again.

"AgH!" Jack moaned. He was going to cum, but before he did, he pulled his member out of her mouth with a faint pop sound. He then flipped me over so I was on the bottom. He bent over and nibbled my neck leaving bite marks that were visible. She moaned, he then scooted his way down and thrust his tounge into her, his nose rubbing her clit, he then sat up and pinched the clit lightly between hie fingers, making her moan. He then got up and edged his way slowly into her, once he was in, he moved slowly, careful not to bring her any pain. She was tight, he was moaning, too. They were both enjoying it. after a litle bit y/n moaned

"Jack! I'm gonna-" And they both came together, screaming each other's names. And after they fell asleep in each other's arms, a thin layer of sweat between them.
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DuskNP Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
My mind is blown. I don't know what just happened, cause it happened so fast. I'll just reread. ;3
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LinkDrowned Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2014  Student Writer
-slender walks through and hears moaning-
Slendy: what the everliving?.....
*he opens the door*
-Jack and me are asleep-
Slendy: O.o
-jack wakes up and quickly pulls a blanket up and slendy just closes the door-
Slendy: *loss at words for a moment* I'm going fishing
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creepypastagirl781 Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yes I made it like that for a resin so it would be kinda funny to the reader. And they could imagine if someone barges in during "naughty" time
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LinkDrowned Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2014  Student Writer
Good idea. Your a great write
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creepypastagirl781 Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks.. I could have done better i wrote this in ten min. And I'm afraid that I will not be finishing the sequel for this story for another four years
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LinkDrowned Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2014  Student Writer
You can, I can't wait because eyeless jack is my favorite
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creepypastagirl781 Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
No I mean my father thinks that I deactivated the account because I'm not 18 yet. But once I then 18 I'm gonna finishe this fucker
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LinkDrowned Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2014  Student Writer
Good idea
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creepypastagirl781 Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I wanna finish it so badly!! GAH! Stupid dad! And I'd finish it now but I am only allowed on y iPod as well an I can't so much on an iPod
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Pyraah Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2013  Hobbyist
and Slenderman was walking throught the woods... "whats that?"
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